{"id":1671,"date":"2012-11-06T01:59:45","date_gmt":"2012-11-06T06:59:45","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/andrewyames.com\/artm2210\/?p=1671"},"modified":"2012-11-08T19:02:46","modified_gmt":"2012-11-09T00:02:46","slug":"folklore-reviews","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/andrewyames.com\/artm2210\/folklore-reviews\/","title":{"rendered":"Folklore Reviews"},"content":{"rendered":"

Alyssa- I thought the illustrations went along well with the story. I liked the scrolling figure of the man. One suggestion I would make would be to not make the lines of text so wide, it makes it a little hard to read.<\/p>\n

Zac- I loved the simple illustrations of the crows. They were simple yet so detailed. One issue I found with the page (and I don’t know if was just because my laptop screen is smaller) was that it was very wide and I could not zoom out so I had to scroll back and forth to see the whole picture.<\/div>\n
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Rachel- MY favorite part about this is how the tower and hair win down through the page. I thought all of the different textures were really great. I also like how some of the dialogue is bigger than other parts, emphasizing it. The one thing I noticed was that pieces of the illustrations were becoming pixelated. Could that be a slicing issue?<\/div>\n
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Milt- The scenes of this are great. Each one has almost a stained glass appearance which I think fits the story. I also think the boxes around the text give a nice effect. Although it’s very interesting, the story was short and it felt like there were pieces missing.<\/div>\n
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Jacob- The scrolling, swaying, and pulsing images on this are great. They really do help emphasize some of the emotions being illustrated in the story. I also like the how gradient begins and ends in darkness. The only I’m not sure about is all of the white area behind the images.<\/div>\n
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Brian- I think this page is so different from all the others. The way it’s bracketed gives a good sense of the different layers trying to be portrayed. I love the use of the old illustrations. One thing I might change is maybe making some of the layers thicker to enhance the effect of moving down.<\/div>\n
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Laura- I enjoy the simple imagery and I think each scene is separated well from one another without interfering with the flow of the story. One thing I might change is perhaps making each scene the same size.<\/div>\n
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Justin- I like this story. I think each scene depicts what’s going on in the text very well. One thing I noticed is that the edges looked a little fuzzy as if it’s a bit too stretched.<\/div>\n
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Ryan- These might be my favorite illustrations. I really like the no-lined simplistic style. I think the whole story flows really well across the page. The only bad thing I have to say is “comic sans.”<\/div>\n
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Latiyfa- I love these illustrations. I think the way they move across and down the page also helps the story come to life (especially the hovering blue figure). The only thing I might change is maybe space out the images on the top half a little more.<\/div>\n
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Katie- I like the story, and the insect images. Though, maybe there should be more than 3 scenes just to break it up bring in a little diversity.<\/div>\n
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Alyssa- I thought the illustrations went along well with the story. I liked the scrolling figure of the man. One suggestion I would make would be to not make the lines of text so wide, it makes it a little hard to read. Zac- I loved the simple illustrations of the crows. They were simple […]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":46,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[17,83,78],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1671","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-discussion","category-fall-2012","category-student-work"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/andrewyames.com\/artm2210\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1671","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/andrewyames.com\/artm2210\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/andrewyames.com\/artm2210\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/andrewyames.com\/artm2210\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/46"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/andrewyames.com\/artm2210\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1671"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/andrewyames.com\/artm2210\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1671\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1699,"href":"https:\/\/andrewyames.com\/artm2210\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1671\/revisions\/1699"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/andrewyames.com\/artm2210\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1671"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/andrewyames.com\/artm2210\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1671"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/andrewyames.com\/artm2210\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1671"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}