Zac:<\/p>\n
What works best:<\/p>\n
-The colors are visually interesting\/look really well together. I just personally love the combo of light blues and black so that may just be me.<\/p>\n
-I think the images compliment the story really well-each image ties in to the story so it’s not like you’re asking \u201cWhy is this included?\u201d<\/p>\n
-It works well being centered<\/p>\n
What I would improve:<\/p>\n
-At least when I opened my browser, I had to zoom out a tiny bit to be able to read through the story. It wasn’t that big of a deal, because we all have that problem, but I think that if we had knowledge of how to make it look it’s best on all browsers and monitors than that is the first thing I would do.<\/p>\n
-Maybe add an animation feature where the crows actually look like they are flying down, I think that would look pretty cool and add a lot of visual interest.<\/p>\n
Milt:<\/p>\n
What works best:<\/p>\n
-The images are really abstract and visually interesting.<\/p>\n
-The images compliment the story really well.<\/p>\n
-I think that the images are what really makes the story interesting. I’ve looked over it twice and each time I’ve found something new that I didn’t notice the first time.<\/p>\n
What I would improve:<\/p>\n
-I think I would make the images more colorful-maybe draw more attention to certain aspects(like he did with the eye, it pops out at you)<\/p>\n
-Personally, I feel like it would be a little more visually interesting if the images were more centered<\/p>\n
-Maybe add a scrolling effect where instead of scrolling with the scrollbar, you can just click to each one.<\/p>\n
Rachel:<\/p>\n
What works best:<\/p>\n
-The image of the tower and how Rapunzels hair flows down the page<\/p>\n
-The jumps to paragraphs works really well<\/p>\n
-Even though there is just one image<\/p>\n
-The colors worked really well<\/p>\n
What I would improve:<\/p>\n
-It would be cool to have the hair moving with the page as well<\/p>\n
-Make the jumps a little smoother, it seemed to jump really fast<\/p>\n
Jacob C:<\/p>\n
What works best:<\/p>\n
-The animation of all the different images<\/p>\n
-Even though the background is really plain, it works well with the story especially at the end when it seems as if the water is getting higher<\/p>\n
-Really liked the moving gourd<\/p>\n
What I would improve:<\/p>\n
-Add a blue background throughout the whole page<\/p>\n
-Too much white space<\/p>\n
-Add a jquery so it jumps<\/p>\n
Brian:<\/p>\n
What works best:<\/p>\n
-Each level of hell is laid out well and explained<\/p>\n
-I like how it goes from red to black<\/p>\n
What I would improve:<\/p>\n
-Maybe make the images bigger and more related to each level somehow<\/p>\n
-Add a Jquery<\/p>\n
-Maybe add a little devil that floats down with the page when you scroll<\/p>\n
What I would improve:<\/p>\n
-Maybe add fire as a background somehow, or have fire at the bottom and animate it<\/p>\n
-Change the colors around<\/p>\n
Laura :<\/p>\n
What works best:<\/p>\n
-I really liked the jumps to each image, I think that it made it really interesting.<\/p>\n
-Love the vibrant colors, illustrations are really well done!!!<\/p>\n
-I really like how texturized the last image is.<\/p>\n
What I would improve:<\/p>\n
-I am not sure if this is just how my browser is, but it has all the images at the very left with a lot of blank white space towards the right. Maybe what I would do instead is center all of the images, and then just add a blue background behind that so it looks a little more interesting.<\/p>\n
-Or she could just put the text at the side next to the images.<\/p>\n
Justin L:<\/p>\n
What works best:<\/p>\n
-Really good illustrations<\/p>\n
-Good font, it fits in with the story!<\/p>\n
-Images fit in well with the story<\/p>\n
What I would improve:<\/p>\n
-Add the Jquery<\/p>\n
-Add in the title of the story on there<\/p>\n
-Fill up the whole webpage with the images instead of just on the side<\/p>\n
-Or maybe even center all the images, then just add a plain background<\/p>\n
Ryan :<\/p>\n
What works best:<\/p>\n
-Really good illustrations<\/p>\n
-Incorporated into the story really well<\/p>\n
– colors work really well together<\/p>\n
-good layout<\/p>\n
What I would improve:<\/p>\n
-Making it so it would look good on all monitors\/browsers, but that’s definitely more advanced than what we know how to do now.<\/p>\n
-Add jumps from one image to the next<\/p>\n
Lizzie:<\/p>\n
What works best:<\/p>\n
-Illustrations!<\/p>\n
-Colors<\/p>\n
-Text and images tie into one another very well<\/p>\n
-layout<\/p>\n
What I would improve:<\/p>\n
-Add a Jquery<\/p>\n
-Make the animals move around<\/p>\n
Evan:<\/p>\n
What works best:<\/p>\n
-The Illustrations are really good<\/p>\n
-Colors<\/p>\n
-I like how the smoke comes disappears behind the mountain and comes out the other side<\/p>\n
-Images tied into story well<\/p>\n
What I would improve:<\/p>\n
-Add a Jquery<\/p>\n
-Move the \u201cliquor\u201d text that is on the barrel down so it is more on the barrel than half on half off.<\/p>\n
Latiyfa:<\/p>\n
What works best:<\/p>\n
-Really nice illustrations<\/p>\n
-Love how the images move!<\/p>\n
-Colors work really well<\/p>\n
-Text and images work really well together as well<\/p>\n
What I would improve:<\/p>\n
-Not sure if it was just my laptop, but viewing the webpage was a little slow and laggy<\/p>\n
Katherine:<\/p>\n
What works best:<\/p>\n
-Everything fits into the story<\/p>\n
-Illustrations are good<\/p>\n
-I like how you can click on the footprints and it will take you to the next part<\/p>\n
What I would improve:<\/p>\n
-The title on the page is a little jumbled together and overlapping<\/p>\n
-Make it fit to browser better<\/p>\n
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